Mysteeq's writing learning story

My personal profile

I try hard, I work hard, I struggle, but I never give up.

The purpose of this writing is to tell my reader who I am as a person and what my identity is about.

To communicate my identity effectively, as a writer I can.

• Use a hook to make the reader interested.

• Make my reader work something out (infer) by:

   -giving clues and not stating directly (show not tell)

   -using anecdotes and examples.

• Use a creative and interesting writing style,(poem, news report...)

• Use punctuation to show your reader how to read and make sense of your writing.

While I was writing my personal profile I was good at show not tell for e.g (I was introduced to this world 2007 and I am in year 7 at Corinna school.)

In my personal profile I used a creative hook for e.g (do you have an identity?cause I do and here it is.)I think That it was good because I asked a question to make them think about the answer.)

I need to work sitting in the right place so I can get more writing done and so I can get finished faster than I did for e.g (sitting by myself so no one can talk to me and so I don’t talk to them.)

My next steps are to write more information about myself so that my reader knows more about me and how my life is and how I choose to live.